I was really surprised how much of a difference having pictures in your writing can make. As I was reading the profiles in chapter 7, I realized being able to match a face and place to story/situation made it much easier to imagine. Another thing that I saw that really struck me was the Phonak Ad on page 221. It shows a man all beat up: which really gets your attention, then goes on to sell hearing aides! It surely got my attention, so it worked- stuff like this really makes a huge impact and difference in how things/products/people are perceived.
Part 2:
I found a great profile on my favorite athlete: Lauren Fisher. This profile is very interesting and well done because it explains what all she has done and whats she plans to do with her competitive career. She is a very driven and determined person that has found what she loves. As an athlete she's unstoppable and only getting better, as a person she is extremely humble and has the best work ethic in the world.
http://espn.go.com/espnw/athletes-life/article/11977327/in-crossfit-olympic-lifting-lauren-fisher-powerful-presence
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